Review Detail of Nelom in Reborn as a warp god with a warp system in Warhammer 40k

Average quality can still be improved, the story has a lot of potential, I love it!!! The thing that bothers me is knowing that it's been a little long before I see the protagonist in 40 k I can't wait but precisely I hope it will be soon enough I can't wait to see the reaction of mortals with the protagonist