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DaoistycJtuv
DaoistycJtuvLv48mth
2024-06-30 06:57

Very bad grammar. It makes difficult to follow the plot. If it is a translation, should get a better one. If it’s an attempt to write in English, should learn the basics. He/him/his= referring to a male She/her/hers= referring to a female. As for reviewing, it will be unfair to count with it because I couldn’t get pass the third chapter. But I will go with what I got so far.

Empress Is Too Powerful

Bu Ji Er Er
2.6
390 Chs

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QueenFK_B
QueenFK_BLv15

It’s too hard to read, the original plot it great but because of the wrong pronouns and wrong use of words, it makes this book terribly difficult to read and understand. So i have to stop reading this book, which is really a pity.

2yr

radhika_rao
radhika_raoLv4

Story is good Fl is cool The only thing is if someone can beta it , it will be way more fun It not only has grammatical errors but it gets a bit confusing sometimes because of mistakes written

1yr
DaoistAGF
DaoistAGFLv15

badly translated to the point of being unreadable. not just the usual hmpronoun mistakes but name swaps so you are confused about who is saying what

2yr
Sinjin
SinjinLv15

The plot looks fun. But the switching back and forth between he and she for the same character, multiple times per chapter, right from the beginning. nope. Just can’t read it. Pity. And since I can’t read it. I can’t tell how the plot, world background, or anything else is. Not with the writing how it is. Sorry.

2yr
peeyatotz
peeyatotzLv14

It's a pity that there aren't many reviews for this novel. I think this one is an original and the writers' first language isn't English and of course, there aren't funds for editors just yet. Novel Review: This one is a good read. The Fl's character is really good and I really like how it was made. Even though there are minor grammatical errors I do believe this one has potential. Reviews can either make or break a writer so please be kinder. *just saying* I have read a lot of historical novels and this really piqued my interest. This is really a refreshing read. You guys should try it.

2yr
Alicia_AYew
Alicia_AYewLv14

Reveal spoiler

7mth
FAEYA
FAEYALv15

EVERYTHING IS A WHOLE MESS. NAMES, PRONOUNS, VERB, GENDER. 👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎

8mth
DaoistRinPim
DaoistRinPimLv15

The story is interesting. But it feels incomplete in development and does not flow. So the end is not really satisfing and the reader wonders what happened.

8mth
DaoistRinPim
DaoistRinPimLv15

The idea was great 👍. But the execution was terrible 😕 The translation made it hard to read and even harder to understand. Hopefully there will be a revision.

9mth
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