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2024-02-27 12:49

The synopsis is your clue as to the poor translation. Then, from the very first chapter the sentences are awkward and lacking in flow. There is confusion as to who is talking and who is being referred to. The story plunges right in with an attempted sexual assault and confusing mention of caves and mountains screaming… It doesn’t get any better. In short, this needs an editor. Seriously. A team of them..

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