The writing quality feels like either a really good Chinese translation or a newbie writer who doesn’t proofread what they write. It hasn’t updated in a year, so an obvious flaw in update stability. The story development mainly just consists of “Mc is so good, strong, and smart and his opponents are dumb”. There is no character design, the MC’s whole thing is he’s a murderous psychopath and that’s it. It’s also pretty inconsistent about how much of a psychopath he is. He’ll kill little children and defenseless citizens but he’ll adopt Naruto for some reason despite not really needing him. The worlds he travels to come with a background already, but he somehow accidentally impregnated Kaguya despite the fact it probably shouldn’t be possible. Each world arc is also pretty short, ranging between 5-10 chapters. Otherwise my biggest complaint is that when someone criticizes or complains about the way the author does something or about the MC the author just responds with “what did you expect” or “it’s my novel I do what I want”. Both of which are true in a sense but then what was the point in posting it? Just seems more like a power trip fantasy than a story. I also only really finished the Naruto arc, didn’t really want to read anymore especially since the literal god of Naruto who was a reincarnator allowed this dude to power up so much. Hella plot armor honestly, especially since this supposed “god” knew who reincarnated the MC.
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