Review Detail of Ford_rox in The Sims System

The premise for the story is interesting, so started reading it. unfortunately it's very difficult to follow, due to poor grammar with a bit more editing to correct this, I could see it being a very good read. Also another issue I had was using up several chapter for the MC to examine his stat bar and its functions. So I am bringing it for now hopefully the Auther re-edits the story so it is less confusing, or possibly gets someone to edit for them if possible. Best of luck and Keep at ti.