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NovelMonster
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Writing quality - meh Updating stability - above average Story development - ……did you have that? Seemed very loose and aimless with a generic “get stronger” drive. Character Design - garbage Genji sucks. Annoying and terrible planning World background - your system is terrible and exposed minimal knowledge of the world’s power levels

Corrupting Worlds

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The writing quality is fair enough but as you read further the quality would gradually get better as they get more experience with it Can't say anything bout updating stability For story development it may seem like it's a loose adventure but if you actually think it does have one even if very unnoticeable his goal seems to be to not only get stronger but to also have strong ties with all nations so he would have strong backing like how he is using azula and yuki which would probably end in a uniting the world cinareo there's your story line As for character design while I agree for most characters that don't have in depth thoughts and seem to go purely based on current circumstances Genji himself tho dumber than the story makes him out to be is actually very well developed and has a extremely realistic personality I mean if u want a drean 'I will be a hero' mc go watch the actual show Now for world building are you even paying attention? The system is very standard I'll give you that but how much more boring would it be if this story had exact power levels it's better than if it did cause what power levels do when it's like everyone has one and its exact it sets boundaries that don't allow for fun fights or up hill battles that end in victory its simply "he could beat him, he could beat him, barely beat him, get destroyed by him" And finally for someone who said it was a standard power seeking story u sure complained about a lot of stuff a power seeking story would have I think that's what u actually want