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Kai_Writer151
Kai_Writer151Lv152yr
2022-09-21 11:45

I can't begin to describe how an author makes an mc who was at least somewhat successful and then reincarnated to having no intelligence, always whining, easily triggered, and has no prospective goals and on top of that time skips several years skipping over plot points.

Reincarnated With A Badluck System

Perverted_Fella
3.7
96 Chs

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Veasna_TDM
Veasna_TDMLv11

I seem this a lot, some author doesn't know that reincarnated mc don't need character development. Reincarnated mc should be the most hard working or at least very smart, and not just rashly provoke conflict. And they usually don't make mistake much, as their past made up their character. nowadays, authors use reincarnated mc just because it popular, and don't even use modern knowledge to their advantage, and often time make them very dumb for character development. It kind of sickening. Should have just stick with normal kid character for an mc if they gonna act immature.

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Perverted_Fella
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The most shameless author here... I just want you to know that the MC acts naive and annoying, unlike his age in the early 30s chapters...........

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Melshan
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SkeletonSama6969
SkeletonSama6969Lv4

as a fellow degenerate, I hate dramas......... exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp

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Sorenmageofmareth
SorenmageofmarethLv14

This starts off an okay funny prelude to a perverted romp but then guickly jumps the shark taking itself too seriously and skipping wide swathes of development. It becomes basically a non sequitur with random trash protagonist cliches happening out of nowhere and back filling a chapter that skips thirty two years of life. many stories have completely ended in that time frame. the character seems to lose there intelligence as well. the story seems retoconned even with Vadicus hating the mc for having a different dad despite him pulling them off the streets and them going to the streets despite the mom being a powerful mage in her own right. it's really really silly.

2yr
MidnightEgg
MidnightEggLv1

The update schedule is tight, the characters got charm, and the writer got his tongue-and-cheek humor conveyed as he tells his tale. I've read some of the author's previous works and he's come quite far on improving both writing quality and language, whilst he's still not perfected his use of the English language I would assume most readers wouldn't find much fault if any (No problems which detract from story quality). The story takes its time, but it never grinds to a halt, if you're looking for a fun yet perverted story I'd advise you to pick this one up and give it a go.

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Zap_Nmn
Zap_NmnLv11

this is just sad.... like... really sad.....................................................................................................

2yr
LordThaddy
LordThaddyLv10

Another case of excellent world building and inadequate character development and plot. The stage gets set with reincarnation+system and MC is born as a child then we have a 16 year time skip. The author just randomly throws whatever he thinks up & then tries to run with it. The plot is barely coherent. I almost got my hopes up then was immediately let down

2yr
Kw0z
Kw0zLv14

Thought I should warn ya’ll that there’s Yuri since the author decided to completely leave that out of his description of the story. Not sure why he would warn for in**st but not yuri.

2yr
ClearSkyDaoist
ClearSkyDaoistLv11

I won't recommend this its like trying to read a book with missing pages another thing is sometimes things in the book don't make sense, kind of like the characters are made stupid just for the sake of moving the story. At the end of the day, people read stories to enjoy themselves, I'm not enjoying this at all.

2yr
raeoflight1985
raeoflight1985Lv15

DONT READ! THIS IS NOT A COMPLETED STORY! Also the Mc gets told one of his skills will basically cause extremely strong enemies to hunt him and the more he uses it the more danger... what does he do? uses it in the next couple chapters. and then the story ends...

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