Review Detail of Bjorn_Stormwave in Cancelled101

Just not my thing. The WQ is fine, but there are grammar errors and the flow is off at times. SOU: 5 stars. SD: It doesn't make much sense to me, almost nothing is explained. No clue whats happening half the time, very confusing. 3/5. CD: It makes no sense. The characters all act in ways that make no sense. It just doesn't make sense. WB: Almost nothing explained, confusing, 1/5 stars. . Personal Note: Also, Personally, I do not like the racial sterseotypes and the clear input of the authors opinions, like 'ScrewAmericaTimes1000' as a password on a PC.