Another novel with a strong female lead <3 Review Proper from the latest chapter 17 release: (Might contain spoilers. I don't want to use the spoiler function since it makes my review mixed up with no spacings.) Writing Quality. 4/5 The description and narratives flow with great fluidity. However, in the earlier chapters of the novel, I'm bothered with the capitalizations of the nouns such as 'I' and some beginning of the names as well that were written in small caps. Then the capitalizations of some beginning of the sentences as well. There is also quite a mixture of tenses in some parts. However in chapters 10 onwards and such it lessened and became better. Though the first chapters are what most attracted potential readers first, I advised if you could edit them. You can use Grammarly or Google docs word. These two tools help me a lot as well since writing and editing your own work is really a hassle thing to do at the same time. Stability of Updates. 5/5 The story has stable updates so far. Story Development. 5/5 I say the first parts of the story are quite intense, how the female lead, Yule died and was able to reincarnate in Adelle's body. Though it is still a mystery to me about how she reincarnated. I also loved the part about the Diary, it is written very well and gave the reader what kind of person is Adelle before Yule arrived in her body. Oh, I also love the slap scenes, Character Design. 5/5 Yule, now Adelle, has a strong persona which I like. Though her bg story saddened me. The other characters are also likable. However, somehow, my favorability level to Nathaniel is still low xd, just because she change now, he is starting clinging to her now hayss. I'm on team Daniel! Though *ehem* Eli is my bias *ehem* World Background. 5/5 Well-written. I love her previous magic which is ice, though it is not revealed what magic she has as Adelle. And the story alternates with Adelle's fight in her noble's life and the fight of Yule's previous comrades to the hordes, which is nice. I wonder how the author will soon merge those two. Overall this story has a lot of potential. Keep it up, author! Added this to my library!

I love covers, and this one does not let me down. Cultivation is mentioned in the story, which is not particularly unusual, but hey! It's fascinating. Although the world background is somewhat similar to many I have read, it offers a unique plot. However, it does offer unique twists. I'm interested to see how this develops.

Okay, the story is very interesting from the start. The characters are also well written but the writing style could use some work. I noticed some grammatical errors. But it is not a big deal. You can edit it easily. Overall, the story has potential. I would love to keep reading. All the best Author. [img=recommend] PS:- The book cover is very adorable.

A great story with a captivating plot. It gets the readers hooked right from the beginning. The grammar and tense are on point. The story flows smoothly, I can't detect any grammatical errors so far. Keep up the good work, Author.

Great storytelling of a great female lead! Each chapter ends with the reader wanting more. The world-building and the way you give life to the characters are enough to recommend this novel to anyone. Keep up the good work and keep making great chapters!

I always love to read where we can see a female lead. Love this of course. I should say that the author has done a great job. Roting for you to keep going. ❤❤❤❤

A decent story. I like the development of the world and the characters. I totally recommend reading this book. It is impossible for you to get bored.

I like the story, The characters are interesting the premise was good. Aside from some grammatical errors, this is a great read. The story is compelling. Every chapter leaves wondering what happens next.

The writing is great. I see some moments where the formatting is a bit off though when it comes to capitalization. The updates seem steady and the story is awesome. The characters are cool but I'd like to see a little more description regarding what they look like. The world-building is amazing, but I'd also like to get more of a picture of what the environment looks like. I enjoy how this story is written in present tense. I love that style. I also enjoy the innovative way the story is told. Feel free to check out my fan fict, it's called "Avatar: Macai's Journey".

I like the premise of the story, despite the small stuff that floats around that irks me, but that's just me nitpicking not gonna lie. Small stuff like short descriptions, though that can be both a good and bad thing, The uncapitalized starting of sentences but that's easy to look past. Besides those, I think you got a solid story in the making and I'll read more whenever I have the free time.