Review Detail of TheCraZyaUthOr19 in FALLEN MOON

 that every description given to the reader helps them to imagine exactly how the writer desires the scenario to unfold, which, while an amazing trait in novels, can be both a benefit and a problem. If the goal is to make the reader visualize all of the eventualities, I believe it is accomplished admirably, but with far too much words. The descriptions should be vivid, but they may also be brief, and they should still convey the impression the author wants to convey. Aside from that, there hasn't been anything in this narrative that has piqued my curiosity. It's something I truly like.