Review Detail of Confused_panda in FALLEN MOON

It's really interesting from what I've read! The story is fast-paced and there are many fleshed out characters. Once you learn who everyone is, then it'll begin to really ramp up as you get invested in them. The author has a very, very clear image of the scenes he's writing. But that is this novel's only downfall. The descriptions are too heavy. I feel that they're too precise even for novels, meaning that there's too much miscellaneous descriptions that just float about. It feels more like a novel rather than a webnovel, which isn't an insult but rather the writing style. I think that it would actually be more clear and concise if you decreased the descriptions and focused more on the flow of events because the flow is there and it's good!