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LIKEInitially, the women don't know that they're with the same man. But he does not directly cheat on them as he uses an unconventional method. Overall, I can say you won't feel he's cheating on his women, since he solves the problem pretty soon, by chapter 10, if I remember right.
Sinful_Cyanide:Did I read the synopsis right and the women don't know he's with other women? Because to me that doesn't sound like a harem, more like one dude cheating on a whole bunch of women.
First of all, as stated in the synopsis, this is not your typical harem novel, but you will still get typical harem as you read the story. Ardor (the mc) also gets a proper harem whose harem members know each other. If you read till chapter 10, I'm sure you'll understand how this'll happen.
Degenerate_Panda:Is it really harem if none of the supposed harem members know? Seems more like cheating.
Yeah that one doesn't really fit well with me as it is basically the same as a clone. It would be one thing if he was in complete control of both, but it is no different from a clone as he separated that part from himself. A clone is a copy of himself with it's own consciousness, this is literally the same exact thing but made slightly differently. If they're going to know about each other eventually anyway then that makes even less sense why you'd do such a thing.
Mister_Op:First of all, as stated in the synopsis, this is not your typical harem novel, but you will still get typical harem as you read the story. Ardor (the mc) also gets a proper harem whose harem members know each other. If you read till chapter 10, I'm sure you'll understand how this'll happen.
It will take some time for Ardor's harem to arrive as he's currently solving the 3rd condition of his ultimate mission.
FunnyBuns:Yeah that one doesn't really fit well with me as it is basically the same as a clone. It would be one thing if he was in complete control of both, but it is no different from a clone as he separated that part from himself. A clone is a copy of himself with it's own consciousness, this is literally the same exact thing but made slightly differently. If they're going to know about each other eventually anyway then that makes even less sense why you'd do such a thing.
I don't blame you for asking. I was actually trying to say good instead of that. I know that novel you've mentioned. That entire novel world is pretty disgusting in my opinion. Shows how messed up the people in the world are to even imagine something like that.
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