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Mister_Op
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2022-02-17 13:12

I'm writing this review after publishing 5 chapters. I assure you this novel has a well planned plot, with a proper structure. The System won't have plot holes and I accept reader suggestion when writing this story. If you have any questions, feel free to reply to this review and ask ahead. Enjoy reading my story :)

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Daoist_Culture
Daoist_CultureLv15

Hey Man, i just found your work. Any chance MC will be on the Evil side?

Mister_Op
Mister_OpAuthor

Not completely. Ardor Flame is an anithero MC. So while he won't go out the way to do evil, he won't stop himself from it if that helps him accomplish his goals.

Daoist_Culture:Hey Man, i just found your work. Any chance MC will be on the Evil side?
Sinful_Cyanide
Sinful_CyanideLv15

Did I read the synopsis right and the women don't know he's with other women? Because to me that doesn't sound like a harem, more like one dude cheating on a whole bunch of women.

Degenerate_Panda
Degenerate_PandaLv15

Is it really harem if none of the supposed harem members know? Seems more like cheating.

Mister_Op:Not completely. Ardor Flame is an anithero MC. So while he won't go out the way to do evil, he won't stop himself from it if that helps him accomplish his goals.
Mister_Op
Mister_OpAuthor

Initially, the women don't know that they're with the same man. But he does not directly cheat on them as he uses an unconventional method. Overall, I can say you won't feel he's cheating on his women, since he solves the problem pretty soon, by chapter 10, if I remember right.

Sinful_Cyanide:Did I read the synopsis right and the women don't know he's with other women? Because to me that doesn't sound like a harem, more like one dude cheating on a whole bunch of women.
Mister_Op
Mister_OpAuthor

First of all, as stated in the synopsis, this is not your typical harem novel, but you will still get typical harem as you read the story. Ardor (the mc) also gets a proper harem whose harem members know each other. If you read till chapter 10, I'm sure you'll understand how this'll happen.

Degenerate_Panda:Is it really harem if none of the supposed harem members know? Seems more like cheating.
FunnyBuns
FunnyBunsLv15

Yeah that one doesn't really fit well with me as it is basically the same as a clone. It would be one thing if he was in complete control of both, but it is no different from a clone as he separated that part from himself. A clone is a copy of himself with it's own consciousness, this is literally the same exact thing but made slightly differently. If they're going to know about each other eventually anyway then that makes even less sense why you'd do such a thing.

Mister_Op:First of all, as stated in the synopsis, this is not your typical harem novel, but you will still get typical harem as you read the story. Ardor (the mc) also gets a proper harem whose harem members know each other. If you read till chapter 10, I'm sure you'll understand how this'll happen.
Mister_Op
Mister_OpAuthor

It will take some time for Ardor's harem to arrive as he's currently solving the 3rd condition of his ultimate mission.

FunnyBuns:Yeah that one doesn't really fit well with me as it is basically the same as a clone. It would be one thing if he was in complete control of both, but it is no different from a clone as he separated that part from himself. A clone is a copy of himself with it's own consciousness, this is literally the same exact thing but made slightly differently. If they're going to know about each other eventually anyway then that makes even less sense why you'd do such a thing.
Mister_Op
Mister_OpAuthor

I don't have plans to give Lance a proper harem since only Bella is actually his harem member and the others are servants/slaves. As the plot progresses, you will understand the deeper reason for Ardor's creation of Lance.

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Mister_Op
Mister_OpAuthor

Your latest comment was auto deleted. Don't use words that will be censored. and there is no c..u.. .ck.. .lo.. d planned for this novel. I agree it's disgusting.

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Mister_Op
Mister_OpAuthor

[Spoiler Alert] Lance/Lust was made to farm LPs for Ardor. I have specifically mentioned the type of women he can do it with, and I intend to keep it that way.

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Mister_Op
Mister_OpAuthor

And yes, only Ardor will have a true harem since he's the MC

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Mister_Op
Mister_OpAuthor

good*

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Mister_Op
Mister_OpAuthor

I don't blame you for asking. I was actually trying to say good instead of that. I know that novel you've mentioned. That entire novel world is pretty disgusting in my opinion. Shows how messed up the people in the world are to even imagine something like that.

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Demonqueen6
Demonqueen6Lv2

why did you stop writing ?

Mister_Op
Mister_OpAuthor

There was a real life issue that needed my immediate attention. I'll get back to writing real soon.

Demonqueen6:why did you stop writing ?
Mister_Op
Mister_OpAuthor

Hey I'm not dropping it. I'll continue it pretty soon.

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