I really wasn't expecting this to be much of a read, just a time killer, but I'm glad I was wrong. Instead of just making a male citrinitas, you took a turn from yellowness and truly made your own story. As far as citrinitas is concerned, I'm not a big fan of characters that always make women swoon, but I can look past that because the Mc doesn't seem to care about most of the women that are after him. Seeing the moments between citrinitas and demiurge never fail to make me laugh, as well as aiz trying to act cool in front pf citrinitas. Overall, this story is a good read, and I can't wait to read more.
Delusion10
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LIKEDelusion10:I'm glad you liked the read! Especially the interaction between Demiurge and Citrinitas (Tgere will be more in the near future) I'll do my best to improve the story where I can!