Review Detail of Gabriel_Lima_2776 in Devil of Lamentation

could you give an actual feedback? please do tell if I have done something wrong. I want to learn from anyone.

What did you expect from webnovel reviews author-san? Finding constructive review is hard when people just view things like this. I mean, how do you define a novel that is "cringe"? It's fantasy for crying sakes! It does have some realistic aspects but the core still remains as fantasy which is already illogical itself.

Don't worry too much about your English, I can read it just fine. Author-san is quite chaotic so you can see that some interactions are not realistic but this is an anime world so things like that are bound happen. The concept of LORD and FOOL I just see as a new idea because when you look at it from another perspective, getting inspiration is quite hard for a writer. Also the cringe part, aren't most fanfics like that? Realistic ones are hard to make because you're doing it in a world that is already the embodiment of illogical when you compare it to reality.