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2022-07-18 16:22

overall story concept is good but writing quality is very poor. The story said to be 1980's but they are acting more like normal backward villages. the fl acting like 10yr old when she is 16 and also reborn from 30 yrs old.the age gap between ml and FL is too confusing 🤦‍♀️🤦‍♀️🤦‍♀️🤦‍♀️🤦‍♀️🤦‍♀️🤦‍♀️🤦‍♀️🤦‍♀️🤦‍♀️

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