Review Detail of SixPathSage in The Resident of Apocalypse

pretty good concept I might be a bit biased since I love all things zombies. the pacing of the story is fairly good in my opinion not to fast and not to slow. world building is okay it could be better but it doesn't take away from it to much. Only problem would be grammar while better than most ff on here and being understandable, it's hard to tell who's speaking at certain points and what's meant to be said.