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Zeyziel
ZeyzielLv142yr
2022-05-07 05:40

The story overall is good. Slight problem with misplacement of gender pronouns. Also, this maybe just me, the Author seems to be taking Yue down the Yandere route where in the original canon she's more of a big sister type, it gives me d unpleasant vibes reading her as d author has depicted her now

The Rise of a Celestial

TianXian
4.7
49 Chs

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TianXian
TianXianAuthor

Sorry about that. I have a guilty fetish for Yanders. However, Yue will be back to her normal personality. It's been a long time since I last read arifureta so I've already forgotten several important things. Thanks for the review :3

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TianXian
TianXianAuthor

Please let me be shameless... Hello everyone! I'm going to write a few things before you read, so you don't regret it later XD. -First: there are a lot of errors both grammatical and pronoun errors -although I guess in the newer chapters, the constant pronoun errors decreased- if you don't want your eyes to bleed, don't read it XD. -Second: my narration is pretty boring, to say the least. I don't know if I'm bored because I'm the writer since I know what's going to happen -my limited and poor imagination doesn't help- F - Third: the dialogue is poor, so don't expect much. As someone who only utters about 100 words a day, I think this is obvious :'( - Fourth: did I already say this story is boring? Well... However, if you don't care about the above points and just want to hang out or have nothing to read, I think this is passable, or at least I'd like to think so XD. - This story contains harem, although I'm not good at romance -nor how to engage in a relationship- at least I'll do my best not to turn it into a Pokémon style haha. - Lastly, this does not contain N-t-r -sorry for those who like it, but honestly, for me, it sucks, and more so having experienced something similar in the past-. Well, to those who read this fanfic, I thank you. See you :3

2yr

Emmanuel_Capricorn
Emmanuel_CapricornLv4

I am looking forward to the story and I would say i have a decent time reading the 6 chapters....but I want you guys to know one thing... Its Chainese, Go figure..

2yr
LUCIFER_20
LUCIFER_20Lv4

The story is great, it gets updated everyday and the chapters have some plot instead of it being just fillers. Looking forward to how the story is gonna turn out.

2yr
InfinityAndBeyond
InfinityAndBeyondLv5

You know when i read the word Celestial, the first thing that comes to my mind is One Piece.... yep those Celestial Dragons..... so i thought it would be Mc reincarnating as Celestial Dragon in One Piece and then story goes on.... it seems that it's not like that. But when i read it, it's good and satisfying 👍👍 Hello author-san, are you going to make the Mc go to One piece world?? and add Robin by the way

2yr
Bakkoy
BakkoyLv4

I thought this was a Marvel fanfic hahaha. so far so good and the MC is cool, not naive and reasonable. good job hope the story continues 👍👍

2yr
naraiz_ryhall
naraiz_ryhallLv3

2yr
ManasCiel
ManasCielLv14

Is good. Worth giving it a try atleast. There are a fair bit of mistakes of him and her, he and she. But it is not that bad. Keep up the good work Author.

2yr
Diky_Maulana
Diky_MaulanaLv1

Ini fanfic yang bagus dan saya suka alur ceritanya.. MC tidak egois atau berkarakter seperti reinkarnator lainnya yang pada dasarnya mesum . Saya dukung karya tulis anda dan tetap semangat

2yr
Kaniion
KaniionLv2

It's a good story, the relationships so far are well done, even the harem isn't something that happens quickly. I'm curious to see what the other worlds will be like, but for now I'm really enjoying it.

2yr
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