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AbyssalVox
AbyssalVoxLv31yr
2023-03-12 00:53

Occasional grammar errors but nothing horrible! The plot is interesting and the dialogue feels real in that it’s very accurate to what a young person would say, not like an old person trying to write teen dialogue. There’s a lot of characters to keep track of but that means you will surely find a favorite character!

Red Blood Century

RomanceFanatic028
4.7
78 Chs

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RomanceFanatic028
RomanceFanatic028Author

Thanks. Now I got it. I think it was a glitch. Btw I’ll review yours right away. Give me some time.

1yr
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AlicoleChronicler
AlicoleChroniclerLv3

I read 33 chapters so far, and I like how the story is developing. There are many interesting characters, with different personalities that make the world feel real. There is plenty of mystery here, every chapter giving the reader more information about the world where it all takes place. With every chapter I read I had more questions than answers, so I'll be looking forward to seeing what happens next!

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RomanceFanatic028
RomanceFanatic028Author

Hi Guys ☺️ First of all, thank you so much for checking this out. i really appreciate it. So if you are wondering what is this novel about. then read the points, i have given down below in the reply sections.

2yr
RomanceFanatic028
RomanceFanatic028Author

So sorry for barging into the review section. but i would like to tell something to my new readers. The start of the story might be slow paced for some of you but later it got improved. I know there are many grammatical mistakes in the first chapters that's why edited it many times. but people were still finding it flawed in review section. (because i think most people didn't read the novel but still, they are copy pasting others review on their own) And I have not shown any character design in this novel. (so you can imagine any person you want.) but if you are still having problems in reading then in future chapters i have given their character discription. World backgrounds will slowly open as the story progresses. (so it could make readers stick to read more because of the mystery.) The character design/ the personalities of my characters will also open in the upcoming chapters. Like in the start, Anastasia is shown as someone logical and caring. but is she really like that? If you want to know then keep reading. Btw don't find logic in this book. because it is fictional for a reason. And in horror mystery, logic doesn't apply, only magic does. That's why keep reading.

2yr
BLACK_LIGHT_
BLACK_LIGHT_Lv1

It's an amazing novel with good writing skills & also very nice character & world-building skills. It's amazing & For those who want to read magic novels, I would recommend them this one. I would like to say to the author best of luck !!!

2yr
Zyusa
ZyusaLv1

I definitely got interested, and the type of book (at the beginning at least) is something I don't read at all but that didn't stop me from liking it. Unfortunately, it only updates on Sundays and Saturdays but the good thing is that it constantly updates on those two days (it seems). The characters are likable and unique, the beginning reminded me of some horror movie the way they met a weird man and went through a forest to find their grandma lol. The writing quality is good, I didn't notice any grammatical injuries or such. Definitely something I would read after I read my current novel ^_^

1yr
Lee_Hazel
Lee_HazelLv1

Great work! it has an interesting story. POV : I am into romance novels Recommended to fantasy lovers. Compels me to rack my brain into determining about what will happen next. Very well written. Mysteries just add up to the spice!!!!

2yr
Little_North_Star
Little_North_StarLv14

I love the plot and storyline, i love the characters emily, the novel is so full of life..well done author[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

2yr
Flexcity035
Flexcity035Lv2

This MC Is very unique. she is not a typical Mary sue character like other fantasy novels. i loved the dynamic between her and her sister. but I am looking forward for the ML, I am very curious to know more about his part of story.

2yr
Loyasilv25
Loyasilv25Lv2

This is my first time writing the review. I absolutely loved the novel. At the start the story is little slowed paced but loved the current plot. so please update regularly 🙏☺️❤️❤️❤️

2yr
smiling_osha
smiling_oshaLv4

This is one of the best works I've read. The story is developing at a faster pace. I really like the background and setup of characters. This book is worth considering. The chapters are simple and easy to understand. Overall it's an amazing work gleaned by the author.

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