Interesting read so far. My only issue is that your paragraphs are waaaay too long so I suggest you sort that part out. It will make it more enjoyable for the reader. Other than that, I love the ML and am excited to see how he is going to try and change Kai's fate or maybe his own fate as well. I've added the novel to my library and will be waiting for updates!!
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LIKEASleepyBookRabbit:Thank you so much! I'll keep that in mind as I write further~image