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ShinBowlNoodles
ShinBowlNoodlesLv42yr
2023-01-13 05:58

Barely readable past chap 17 I recommend grammarly Story developed too fast, Mc got strong too fast and we don’t see any exciting equal or relative fights it’s always the mc slamming or being slammed Rarely describes the environment it’s not as immersive without world building

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ShinBowlNoodlesLv4

And the mc having no goal doesn’t help, “getting stronger to be free” is something no one can sympathize with and therefore the mc feels hollow and unfulfilling

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