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lapis
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2022-03-27 03:07

Read till Chapter 12. Writing quality - 5/5 - Pretty decent all things said. Does not look like fan-translation but more like written by oneself. Story Development - 5/5 - Great development for me atleast. His wishy-washy attitude is slightly irritating but justified as he has no 'golden finger'. Also, like his overly cautious attitude (reminds me of Seiya from that over cautious hero anime to an extent). Character Design - 5/5 - Very unique MC. Hope his Character becomes slightly more brave at times. Updating Stability - 5/5 - ???. Not sure as only 12 chapters are out yet. But upto now, the Update stability is great. World Background - 5/5 - Greek gods era. First time reading any story completely related to Greeks, hope it continues to pique my interest as it does now. Overall - 5/5 - Great work translating such a great work. Hope, the translator could also complete the story, if the same is left unfinished by the real Author ๐Ÿ™.

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Deus_GameMaster
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different opinion with 100 chapters or still good?

lapis
lapisLv4

For me it is still great. The MC still does not have any love interest tho (Very very slow romance is expected). The Fic is on Hiatus I guess, as earlier it used to be updated 5chp/week but now it has been 2/3 weeks since it has been updated. P.S. This is my subjective opinion.

Deus_GameMaster:different opinion with 100 chapters or still good?
Iamsupervegito
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if he chose romance he will die

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Iamsupervegito
IamsupervegitoLv4

look at all the love interests

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Iamsupervegito
IamsupervegitoLv4

media she betrays him and kill him in the future athena she wants him to have a heroic tale and is not interested in him hestia she love like a mother Atlanta she will die in the future by a God

Iamsupervegito:look at all the love interests
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