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the_architect
the_architectLv12yr
2022-04-12 09:01

First of all, I want to say thanks for your efforts in making this book great. You surpassed my expectations for it and I am very happy. I love this book after A demon lord's rebirth... you dropped it but I hope you don't drop this one. The characters are cool especially Zheren, I like him. and wish to see more of him. As for Max, well, he is great too and I love how he isn't a blood-seeking MC or someone who wants to avenge at all cost. It's a nice book and please continue.

My Overlord Demon System

Ruby_banks02
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44 Chs

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thanks for the review

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Author Here!!! Welcome to 'MODS' MODS is all about a kid who isn't able to awaken an ability earlier like most of his mates. He is ridiculed and treated like trash by family and school. But one day, he becomes favoured by A demon lord. Thus, his adventures began. Happy reading and don't forget to support me.🌹

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Haven't read to the end yet, but I think the story might be interesting just from the excerpt alone. Hopefully the author updates more so I don't get to stop at a cliffhanger, Hehe.

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Nice book!!!!!! It is worth a read...................... I hope you don't drop it, keep writing, please.................... I'll be around to support the book.

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I think the book is intriguing..but it's slow-paced. It's good tho, at least, the MC needs some time to get his ability and powers before finally becoming a demon lord. Nice Book...just don't drop it.

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