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Aliya_Babe
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2022-03-22 18:17

I like the chapters so far, it is quite interesting and I like how slow-paced it is. The MC is yet to make friends I can't wait for his main adventures to begin. Great work author! I hope you don't drop the book again.

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Ruby_banks02
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Thank you for the review...I will not drop it.

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I HIGHLY RECOMMEND THIS NOVEL TO ALL OF YOU. Thanks for reading my novel. And as a token of gratitude I read your novel.and guess what? I am jealous of you. You write so well. You write wayyyy better than me. There wasn't any long and boring info dumps unlike my novel. The MC seems genuine and well written. Still, you can never become too good . So I will give you some tips to help you :- 1. Read top novels in WebNovel (top 5) 2. Read real best selling novels like Sherlock Holmes and Harry Potter. (You can find their EPUB version online for free.) 3. Watch videos about how to show not tell. (You are already good at it still it will help you.) 4. Ask the top authors about some tips too. 5. Ask urself why isn't my novel getting the popularity I want. ( Popularity as in comments, reviews, votes etc.) 6. Write, just write. Simple. Write to ur fullest. Wrong, bad, poor, unreasonable still just write. Trial and error is the best way to learn. No one is judging you. Heck no one even knows ur real name. So, just write. And when u wrote a million words u will see that u have come a long way. Just imagine this. U will get goosebumps right? 7. Believe in urself. 8. Live ur work if u don't, then no one will. 9. I don't have anymore tips as I am also a newbie. And Also I have read ur comment where u said u wake up everyday to motivate ur self to write. I feel u bro. Life isn't easy. Just keep pushing and u will win. Ur novel is good and good things can't remain unhidden. I believe in you. U can do it. And even if ur novel didn't do well u can always write another. U r not Shakespeare, right! No one even knows ur name . So, just believe in ur self and push through. I HIGHLY RECOMMEND THIS NOVEL TO ALL OF YOU. [img=update][img=coins][img=exp][img=faceslap][img=fp][img=recommend]

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