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Heaven, Earth, Me

Mortrexo
4.8
1149 Chs

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Mortrexo
MortrexoAuthor

Well, I deleted my previous review because of two important things. My update schedule will be every day at 20:30 GMT+7 until further notice. The second point is that I didn't give my novel 5 stars and that is blasphemy, Why did you just think I'm shameless? I'm not, I totally didn't feel envious of all the other authors that do the same. Finally, I'm writing this novel for fun (at least currently)! Moreover, it is my first time writing anything. If that was not enough, English is not my first language. But don't worry! I'm using two different grammar correcting software! So, it shouldn't be bad, I hope you don't leave because of this. I hope I didn't forget anything... I actually did! Any questions or suggestions about the novel write below. I will answer all of them unless they are nonsense of course. And please refrain from using swear words. If you don't like something about my novel, tell me normally. I only have the outline of the plot and some stacked chapters so changing things is possible!

3yr

Qavid
QavidLv14

I can only say that this novel has me hooked its a super good read and I love that the author is limiting the harem [img=recommend][img=update]

3yr
Mortrexo
MortrexoAuthor

Hello, the author here! So, this second review is posted after 200 chapters! What a crazy thing. The other review has some things wrong, so I'm here to correct them and to tell you about other new things. Firstly, I wanted to thank all of you who have read my novel, we are almost at one million views, and I can't believe it. Thank you, dears. Second, the schedule is actually daily at 21:00 UTC+2. You can easily search how to compare it with your local hour on Google. Next, I wanted to say that I've edited the first ten chapters or so, so the grammar is a little bit rough after that point, but I would say that it is readable. Later, I made massive improvements. Following that, this story has a LIMITED harem. The main character won't go collecting women like trophies and cares about all of them dearly. They are also a big part of the story and won't be left behind and forgotten. They all complement each other, creating a healthy relationship between them. Also, there are only Female on Female relationships; there isn't any romantic situation with males. Finally, Any other question you have, you can ask here or in my comment. Thank you for reading this, and I hope you can try my novel and follow Yasenia's adventures in a cultivation world that is slightly different from the norm. ...I hope I didn't forget anything.

2yr
k1ra3x
k1ra3xLv1

The novel is very interesting, you have daily updates, and the grammar have improved during the course of the story. There are barely any grammmatical errors in later chapters. Give it a try I don't think you will regret it!

2yr
Platypus_Mage
Platypus_MageLv15

It is a very well put together story. Honestly there is not many problems at all with it. The only thing I could say is I want more. That is all.

2yr
Steeven_Velez
Steeven_VelezLv10

If you don't like polyamory, don't read this story, it totally ruined the experience of reading this novel for me, they explain to you from the beginning of the work that the protagonist's mother created and gave birth to the protagonist because she wants her love and He looks for love without betrayal from her, that's why he didn't look for anyone else and only loves the protagonist, then why do you make the mother also have relations with her girlfriends, if from the beginning it was clear that he would only be with her, if not It's like she would have already had her own harem, and the girlfriends accept it anyway, if they make it clear that they are in love with the protagonist and the mother by going out a couple of times also makes her fall in love, what rubbish, at least it makes it clear that there will be all that In the synopsis, it screwed up my reading experience, I'm sorry for the words but this was very disappointing for me, I was loving the story so much :'v

10mth
Leonard321
Leonard321Lv14

good yuri harem novel with pampering mc toward her harem and cold almost on everyone

1yr
MalleShi
MalleShiLv4

Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good.

2yr
Noubu
NoubuLv4

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