Author, thanks for writing your ideas! I loved your book! The protagonist is beautiful and that already makes the reading more pleasant than it already is, the world seems very good and fun, and him being a little dominated is something I liked, because if the protagonist is weak or something and people defend, it gets a little frustrating, and he's not lazy, something very cool, and his powers and the type of system I liked a lot too, and him being smart is another positive point, because the dumb protagonist spoils the reading, I'll give it a go example: "The protagonist doesn't understand something so simple that you get angry" and your protagonist is perfect in my opinion, well the post time is great for normal people, but for a reading addict like me it makes me anxious to wait for your chapters and how good your book is it only makes the situation worse haha, and i loved how the story unfolded so far and the writing is ok too.
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LIKEAff, it didn't fit in everything I wrote... Just know that I love your book, okay?
