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truthfully i have yet to continue reading this until 5 chapters or so. for beginners or new readers of fanfiction you can basically read this and things this is good.but there are people like me who grow with their taste experiencing new fanfiction, web novels and light novels, reading this can't help but to stop reading out of cringe and because it is too absurd.i will not judge people who think this is good, on a certain level if the MC doesn't describe his power in future i think it can be good.first of all is a wet dream fanfic at the beginning without any consequence at all making MC look like an average Minecraft player, seeing most Mine Craft players are children you get the gist.The second is MC cheat that is supposed to be only 3 to begin with because why not take power from the template he takes two give him unnecessary power up in case his not OP enough. and the fact he choose Naruto, Madara and white beard apready give sense of basic weebs. it so overuse i don't know how you can make thing interesting at all with that, the fact he gave all access to their power just to make OP character without character building make him look like cardboard in begining. i can't help but see MC as mentally challenged adult who still do naruto run and live in basement of their parents. third, story setting also same level as chinese fanfic which they just slip people inside japanese anime with fucking chinese name and be done with it, the different chinese fiction albeit MC are standardly annoying it still feel bit more natural.fourth, this is a poorly written OP MC standard for my taste, first of all compared to other fiction work with OP characters like saitama, Anos and etc, which these people describe their power? There is no meaning of this because it just makes people bored, and with most reader knowing what MC uses as a power template it was unnecessary. the fact there a scene where he test his power and describe it in a way of Middle schooler power fantasy make it cringe, no lash back or consequence for power just use it like gta mode, and even give a google translate made up technique because apparently why not? it basically just Amaterasu 1 or Tsukuyomi 1nothing special enough to be a new technique. the inconsistency without limitation of what MC has and has not makes it bad. did i take this too seriously? yes, because i care what i read. people may think that it was just fanfiction, making things up or illogical is fine, but there is a limit and way to make the story feel immersive and if others can why is this not? in the end i just can't handle bad written one.

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