Review Detail of GawkGawk in My Second Life in Another World

I feel like the 3 people he chose is what's holding this fic back. Just one of who he chose would have been a good choice. Right now his powers are all over the place they don't really mesh well together besides sun breathing and Madara's fire style only because they deal with fire. It would have been better if the theme was fire or something else other than 3 completely different power sets. Other than this I enjoyed reading the few chapters that were out.