Review Detail of Khan00 in My hero academia next generation silver style(old project )

Yes I going to work on the first chapter this weekend. Can you explain to me what you like about it

I like the characters and their quirks but with the first chapter why is Deku asking if he wants his quirk, is he old or hurt? What made him able to get unto UA without a quirk and if he could why does he need to train more before getting one for all? with the second one nothing to complain about but with them both we need more information and lastly, an introduction to the class a list of names makes it a bit confusing if we don't know anything about them so you should introduce them individually over time. The number one thing you have going right now is the fact that you aren't having the characters go to UA with the original characters which makes it more interesting since we don't get to see that at all with the other Fan-Fics

Him getting into U.A without a quirk and how he got to test early. Are being saved for a upcoming chapter just wait.