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My Online Girlfriend is the Nine Heaven Divine Phoenix is a story about Lu Ping, a transmigrator with a system that required him to teach at a official school. Unfortunately, due to his poor practical results he failed every time. His girlfriend manages to get him into a school in the end. Alrighty, I was contemplating not giving this trash novel a review. There was absolutely no effort put into this novel. This is a romance novel at it's focus, but the main character's girlfriend is one of the most annoying characters I've ever read. You know, you can tell when a author is new and their writing skills are poor, but this is just taking the low-hanging fruit. Translation quality is quite bad. It's very common for words to be missing, sometimes it seems like half the sentence is gone. (2/5 stars) Story development is awful as well. The author clearly didn't think any of this through, and it shows. The main focus is the romance between the main character and his online girlfriend. The girlfriend hides her identity and becomes a supervisor at the school the main character is at. The author forces readers to sit through some of the most unbearable dialogue and showcases just how annoying she can be. Aside from that, the main character's system and teaching seems like it's put on the backburner. I found myself skipping through every paragraph where the main character's girlfriend is even mentioned. It's straight up just garbage filler. Not to mention this, the entirety the novel is basically just annoying drama. They will spend 3+ chapters over something inconsequential then mention it again after a few chapters again. (1/5 stars) Character design is abysmal. The author really has a penchant for creating super annoying characters. Any character that isn't immediately annoying isn't relevant to the plot. Main character's girlfriend is so annoying I cannot stand it. What kind of unbearable bitch do you have to be to disguise yourself as someone else and manipulate your boyfriend's mother? Jesus christ. Would make my day if when the main character's girlfriend reveals her identity they break up. (1/5 stars, would give 0 if I could) World background is pretty bad overall. Many things in this novel don't make a lot of sense, and the technological level of the world is all over the place. Not to mention there isn't a whole lot of information in the first place. (2/5 stars) Overall, this is just a extremely annoying novel to read. Author has a quite a good ability to make every single character as annoying as possible. World background had zero thought put into it, and the story development is abysmal. I don't recommend anyone reading this trash. I give this novel 2.2 out of 5 stars.

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