Review Detail of kiddeath1998 in Gekai Gamer - Danmachi

I highly enjoy this fanfiction and I think that the lowest it could ever get would be a 3. The main problem that I have is with the system that the main character gets. you are going to either like it or immediately hate it or just not mind it at all and because it's so prevalent throughout the story that's why this gets at 3 but definitely not lower than that. I honestly think it's horrible and wished it would stop talking the sheer fact that it continues to do so makes it feel like we have two main characters and the change of pov is very obnoxious. Every time I'm getting invested into the story or the character it feels like everything becomes a joke whenever that thing talks. I can't really enjoy myself because whenever there's a satisfying moment it just completely gets evaporated when the system talks. sure it was entertaining at first but the more it continues the more i started to realize this is not as good as it should be and it just continues. But if you like it then it should be five stars if you ignore it and it doesn't bother you then it's about 4 stars just because you're constantly ignoring what the author is writing which would indicate that there is something wrong. also have a problem with the way that the damage is calculated and I kind of wish it was more organic feeling but I digress that one's more of a Nick pic. overall this isn't bad and if it wasn't for the system being so prevalent and talkative in the story this would be top tier.