Review Detail of MagusRex in KINETIC
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This is my first attempt at writing a story so please forgive my inexperienced writing quality in the beginning chapters. I have big plans for this story, as well as connecting stories that I'll be writing in the future. If you're interested in something like that then you won't be disappointed. I read all your comments and your feedback helps me improve, please don't hesitate to communicate.
KINETIC
MagusRex
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_BLACK:the question that all people want answers for is it harem author ? author I'm fan of harem obviously
oh thats good, so if there is no harem, is there any romance even its just a little, or just one love interest or slow romance?
MagusRex:Sorry to disappoint but no , I don't plan on going down the harem route.
Deeen:oh thats good, so if there is no harem, is there any romance even its just a little, or just one love interest or slow romance?
Lemonbunzz:The system ruins the character's potential. WHAT HAVE YOU DONEE!!! He can control more than JUST fire bolt!! HE CAN MANIPULATE FIRE AND OTHER ELEMENTS.. RUINED!!
Rex, this is important. Connecting different novels is genuinely a terrible idea. Unless you're planning to make a sequel that comes after the MC in KINETIC dies, then you're going to mess it up. I'm going to put it bluntly here and say that you are not experienced enough. If you're giving a villain from this novel a novel, and he's going to die in Leo's hands, then who cares about that dude? You said early on that Leo has the strongest power in all of existence, and you can't go against that, so any deeply intertwined stories will see the main character of another one of your novels being subordinate to Leo. Unless you pick up on how to write such stories without destroying the continuity of your previous novels in KINETIC, I don't think you should approach the several-MCs-in-a-single-world thing yet. A few examples: Adui's 2nd novel "My Idle Gaming System", or Twilight_Lord's "Heir to the Crazy Necromancer". The latter has taken more chapters to get to a position still below "Crazy Necromancer in the Ruined Tower".
I appreciate the advice but you needn't worry. The way the stories connect will make it so that these issues aren't present. I'm taking my time in planning the follow up story to prevent any other issues involved with the connection as well. Thank you for your concern.
PotatomanVI:Rex, this is important. Connecting different novels is genuinely a terrible idea. Unless you're planning to make a sequel that comes after the MC in KINETIC dies, then you're going to mess it up. I'm going to put it bluntly here and say that you are not experienced enough. If you're giving a villain from this novel a novel, and he's going to die in Leo's hands, then who cares about that dude? You said early on that Leo has the strongest power in all of existence, and you can't go against that, so any deeply intertwined stories will see the main character of another one of your novels being subordinate to Leo. Unless you pick up on how to write such stories without destroying the continuity of your previous novels in KINETIC, I don't think you should approach the several-MCs-in-a-single-world thing yet. A few examples: Adui's 2nd novel "My Idle Gaming System", or Twilight_Lord's "Heir to the Crazy Necromancer". The latter has taken more chapters to get to a position still below "Crazy Necromancer in the Ruined Tower".