i like the concept and how the mc was introduced, but it is way too v fast paced example: at the beginning when he gets his power theres a test of if he’s worthy by breaking a wall. Instead of having to practice learn experiment etc. with his new power he just breaks the wall… also i don’t think the author really understands what kinetic energy is…
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