Title... On Point... (Western Style) Cover... On Point... I can definitely see it as a cover of a famous Novel... (The biggest reason that made me click here) Synopsis... On Point... It entices curiosity And Surprisingly... The Content...? Is actually good... (It gave me a Good "Romance" Genre Vibe on Ch. 1 -- For some reason) Then, Conflict came in... And MANNN... Things got heated... Although, yes... the conversation did get a bit too much (As in, "smth" "smth" "smth" without anything in between often gets people lost... "Wait who's saying that last line...?" "Wha-? Wasn't it you...?" "Wait-! Who are you...?" "Who-? Me?" "I think he meant me...?" "Wait... It's a HE..? Wasn't it a SHE that's speaking...?!?" "SILENCEEEEE...!!!! That's enough... Patient 302, you may leave.", said Dr. Who. "Sigh... You're suffering a severe Dissociative identity disorder. Also known as multiple personality disorder." ) What I do like most is... The writing style... Each paragraph only holds a couple of sentences -- which is GREAT... (A thesis back to back really turn people off. Especially we're in Webnovel, where the majority suffer a short attention span... That long paragraph without breaks is a tall task.) PS. Is this ur first novel...? If it's Well done...
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