Review Detail of CosmicKoi in Nerevar Eln : I'm in a Fantasy Beast World

Item: Nerevar Eln : I'm in a Fantasy Beast World
Rating: 4.8

Review detail

CosmicKoiLv142yrCosmicKoi

So far, so good :) Writing style is a bit immature, but great overall. Interesting characters and world build, fleshed out characters, and slight cliffhangers. I’m interested to know what happens next!

Nerevar Eln : I'm in a Fantasy Beast World

Bebeto_candy

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Bebeto_candyAuthorBebeto_candy

Thank you for your support and review 😊 I'm glad that you like the story. I'm going to improve and develop myself and keep updating. Tbh I'm ashamed of my english, this story was translated from my language again🙈😅 but I'm trying my best to make it as well as I intended😊

2yr

CosmicKoiLv14CosmicKoi

English not being your first language explains why I thought it was a touch immature :) you’re doing great!

2yr