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krishna0512
krishna0512Lv42yr
2023-02-10 20:55

I would give it a decent 3 rating. so, its worth reading if have a day off and nothing else to do. writing quality is good which is very rare nowadays from webnovel. Start of the story was fantastic and concept was also very good (basically the genius squib part in DC). but by the time 40-50 chapters are over it feels like complete filler. I don't know if the author planned for the takeover from metal thing (kudos to you if it was planned) but it felt like author was in a writing block and was just writing some filler chapters till he struck some inspiration. So, all in all I wouldn't recommend reading past chap-50. but still good effort.

The squib who became Iron Lad... In DC

Cathbel
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122 Chs

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Cathbel
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Rather fair assessment all things considered. You’re right : I’ve hit a bit of a dry spell on this story. Still going through it but I’m hoping to find the spark again. As for the Metal thing, it was on my mind ever since Ned’s mind started to wander during combat so… a while ago. Didn’t want to rush it and now… Well, kind of feel like it’s too late.

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IINeeRoII
IINeeRoIILv1

I couldn't keep reading. The Mc is extremely disgusting 😑. 1.- The author does not take into account the background that he gives in the first chapters (he was a genius, betrayed by his family and girlfriend) 2.-extremely unpleasant internal monologues and a character with TDHA. 3.- If he is a reincarnated adult, why does he behave like a 6-year-old child? (I don't get it) The author gives as background an older man who has been through many experiences, so why bother giving him that background. 4.-The magical world doesn't make much sense, huge plot holes. 5.- Excessive trust with his new family (he was betrayed in his life, then why trust blindly again). One would think that the MC would be more careful in this new opportunity but no... Anyway, there are more reasons but I won't bother to write them. I must say that the writing quality is not bad and that the chapters come out periodically.

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Skepparn
SkepparnLv14

Reveal spoiler

3yr
damdidum
damdidumLv5

rather good but the author had no need for hp x dc crossover. Dc has multiple sources of power has added benefit of non interference when using magic with tech around. The crossover didn't make much sense since MC is a squib. Just make a somewhat rich guy with armor or normal person with magic and armor....

2yr
Bob_Uchiha_XD
Bob_Uchiha_XDLv4

Mc is stupid. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

2yr
Hunter_101
Hunter_101Lv13

O don't know I'd it's good or not I didn't read it but I had a question why DC x HP I mean I'd the mc had magic than yeah make sense but as a squib not so much. squibs are not liked in magic world so he can only live in the mundane so DC as normal human cause he has no magic. so why over complicate the story

2yr
Universaldao101
Universaldao101Lv12

great fanfic there are not many good dc fanfics and much less if they are crosses I hope you don't abandon it. Good luck🙂🙂🙂

2yr
Sleepy_Hollow_1472
Sleepy_Hollow_1472Lv13

Its really good and original, love the MC ..............................................................................,..................

3yr
Marvin_Besey
Marvin_BeseyLv5

Great story if you are willing to let it develop. I was able to get through it quickly and had a great time doing so. Can't wait to see where you take this 😊

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