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A little bit of yuri is fine, but holy heck is this excessive. MC is basically a 3rd wheel in this story and not really about him at all. Always feels like the girls completely just forget about him and he gets almost no character development. His entire 19 years of life on earth was thrown out the window wayyyy to easily. Sure I get he can grow out of it but in like 3 months?!? This story would be 1000% better if you only just turned the yuri down and it’s not always behind the MCs back (which does feel like he’s almost getting cheated on).

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Gavin_APYT
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Not completely against yuri, but the story stops being about him. He’s the main character, it’s supposed to be about him. But now he is just a side character. The yuri is excessive putting it mildly , and his character development is horrible, don’t know what else to tell you.

Daoist0gLu26:This comment is just incorrect and it’s crazy, but what can I expect from people that agree with the “yuri is NTR” crowd
Gavin_APYT
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Also in a world where people are just killed in the streets for minor conflic and he doesn’t kill at all, he’s a adult mentally but acts like a complete child, author you started out so strong but you have lost you way. You found the rabbit hole and fell right into it, and you haven’t stopped falling since .

Jheydi327
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Soo MC is A Cuck!

Gavin_APYT
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Not complete as they all still love him but it feels borderline.

Jheydi327:Soo MC is A Cuck!
Jheydi327
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What do you .Ean borderline ?

Gavin_APYT:Not complete as they all still love him but it feels borderline.
Gavin_APYT
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Like some of the girls love each other as well, doing stuff behind his back. If it wasn’t for the fact that they love him it would be cheating, so borderline

Jheydi327:What do you .Ean borderline ?
Daoist0gLu26
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This comment is just incorrect and it’s crazy, but what can I expect from people that agree with the “yuri is NTR” crowd

michele_00
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Daoist0gLu26:This comment is just incorrect and it’s crazy, but what can I expect from people that agree with the “yuri is NTR” crowd