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Nvmdraxx
NvmdraxxLv31yrNvmdraxx

Story development is disappointing, the mcs choice of attending school just doesnt make sense as he is just wasting valuable time that could have been spent to train, instead using it to help other people that he barely knows. World background, giving a low rating due to the constant info dump throughout the novel

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Vampire's Slice Of Life

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Slr1
Slr1Lv4Slr1

Hmmm. I think that the author mentioned that he did not graduate so he wanted to. And he could learn about the world he was in. Since he had to experience it himself.

B_L_A_C_K_Soul
B_L_A_C_K_SoulLv14B_L_A_C_K_Soul

I like the info dumps and is that not what worldbuilding is?

Ero_Sage
Ero_SageLv11Ero_Sage

Yes, the novel has good world building. Maybe the explanations were a bit excessive to his tastes.

B_L_A_C_K_Soul:I like the info dumps and is that not what worldbuilding is?
Slr1
Slr1Lv4Slr1

World building is cool. Atleast it is for those with imagination

ark_of_dark
ark_of_darkLv4ark_of_dark

he's only attending school for 50 chapters after that he dicide to drop out

Primesquad
PrimesquadLv2Primesquad

info dumps are blocks of text to explain world whereas world building is a scene where magic happens to show that there is magic without explaining anythinv or a character looks at a picture or something without explaining it

B_L_A_C_K_Soul:I like the info dumps and is that not what worldbuilding is?