Review Detail of Philip_John_3596 in In a mage world

Not bad, been interesting so far, wondering how life In school would be, don't disappoint me please,am betting on you,vee high. Although there are some things that are out of points, like characters description, environment description, it's still an interesting story. While I think the rate at which that Philip turned his son over to a stranger is a little too catchy, would you give your child to a stranger just because he's also a dad or something? hope to see more improvements in future chapters