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Kaito_Uzumaki
Kaito_UzumakiLv47mth
2024-08-22 20:18

Don't mind me just dropping off some stars in passing

Return of the Krogan

JManM
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JManM
JManMAuthor

How'd you like the expanded intro. We got more details, and more narration. I felt like it was nothing but wins.

7mth
Kaito_Uzumaki
Kaito_UzumakiLv4

Man it was great. And the expansion is just*chef kiss* more detail. more flavor .it's like the first draft but just more you know? I don't feel like I'm reading the same thing. Hell, it feels like a new story

JManM:How'd you like the expanded intro. We got more details, and more narration. I felt like it was nothing but wins.
7mth
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JManM
JManMAuthor

I'm really enjoying laying down foreshadowing and filling out deets now that I know what I'm doing.

Kaito_Uzumaki:Man it was great. And the expansion is just*chef kiss* more detail. more flavor .it's like the first draft but just more you know? I don't feel like I'm reading the same thing. Hell, it feels like a new story
7mth
Kaito_Uzumaki
Kaito_UzumakiLv4

I'm not gonna ask for spoilers but is there Elden Ring in one of Grunts' jumps?

JManM:I'm really enjoying laying down foreshadowing and filling out deets now that I know what I'm doing.
7mth
Kaito_Uzumaki
Kaito_UzumakiLv4

Nevermind the question. When I asked it I was higher than the kite you usually compared to I think my high brain was trying to type that question without sounding like it's asking for spoilers but just ask the same thing but with more words lol

Kaito_Uzumaki:I'm not gonna ask for spoilers but is there Elden Ring in one of Grunts' jumps?
7mth
JManM
JManMAuthor

yeah, it's one of my teaser stories.

Kaito_Uzumaki:I'm not gonna ask for spoilers but is there Elden Ring in one of Grunts' jumps?
7mth
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Martyrous
MartyrousLv15

I love the story so far and am still waiting for you to continue Ultimate Krogan more than 2 years later......

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NoBookNoLife
NoBookNoLifeLv14

Got to say, I really like your stories. Sure they sometimes are on crack, but the flow and the reactions of the characters are why I'm still here and reading what your writing. Every person in your stories have brains and they use them, which is just so much more than other fics or non-fics can say. I do love your cyberpunk/fallout one best, as I'm a sucker for those types of stories where the mc creates tech. Hope you will continue to make great stories :)

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Kaito_Uzumaki
Kaito_UzumakiLv4

Do you think. maybe this time he and space momma can get together. Nothing against Gaius-bro but come on... it's shepard

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Oliver_Jack
Oliver_JackLv1

Are you redoing the original or updating it? I like the original and it's crossovers and spin-offs. And your other works too. And now I'm just writing to be able to post this. I don't do reviews that often.

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Leip0t
Leip0tLv4

GRUNT MY MAN HOW YOU'VE BEEN, but seriously didn't think I would see a day where this would get a sequel

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Kaito_Uzumaki
Kaito_UzumakiLv4

And the story continues with Zaeed smack talking some cerberus fools and dropping some Krogan Husbandry

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Kaito_Uzumaki
Kaito_UzumakiLv4

yep. this is it. We're back to reviewing until 69 dawgs

7mth
Eric8the4lost_
Eric8the4lost_Lv4

Looking forward to the fable jump. I'm curious though, how is he going to explain his appearance, is he gonna say that his father ####Ed a troll or something, and how he always had this strange fettish about women much bigger than himself or something?

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