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TwistedTsunami
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2024-07-27 12:48

The blurb is a lie. Rio is not the main character, Link is. The favoritism is so blatant and for some odd reason, the author seems confused that we call him out on it. I will say that he has done a fantastic job of making Rio an extra not only in the novel world but also his reincarnated one as well. I would say the author is cooking something extraordinary for Rio, but I no longer trust him. I was astonished he won at the competition, though I side eye him that he only did that so the readers don’t stage a mass protest. Grammar leaves a lot to be desired, the earlier chapters are atrocious and I urge the author to edit those chapters. This is a character driven book so 6/5 for bringing so many characters to life. World building is great and the romance is cute without being full of dramatic misunderstandings. Despite my frustration with Rio always getting the short end of the stick and Link being the real Mc, I do like the novel and can’t wait to see how the story develops. One particular plot I’m waiting on is Kira, I have my suspicions about her so I can’t wait to see if I’m right. If you can get past the grammar, I believe you will find the novel enjoyable. Good job author.

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Calm_Mountains
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Rio literally is the extra, look at the novels name again bruh, also thanks for the high praise I will edit the previous chs

Douke
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Thats actually good author it would be boring if this will be a Rio one man show like other novels

Calm_Mountains:Rio literally is the extra, look at the novels name again bruh, also thanks for the high praise I will edit the previous chs
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