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Item: The One Snap Boy
Rating: 4.8

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The concept is really good but I feel like there is too much dialogue in one place. It takes away from the action in some cases but that is just my opinion on the issue. I do like the story progression and how it is presented though so I would give the story that.

The One Snap Boy

Stormzz

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StormzzAuthorStormzz

Thanks for the review! I'm glad you liked the story. I prefer to tell the reader key information through dialogue rather than outwardly telling them (It's what I prefer as a reader) but there isn't too much character setup left, so more action should be put into the story soon.

2yr