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PhoenixpqLv42yr
2022-02-07 02:21

I Think this stOry is very good and i hope it will not be drropt Pleas keep writing . . . . .….… . .… .… .… . .…… . . . .…. .… . . .… .… . . .

Fate as a Servant

Vitamin_F
4.7
44 Chs

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Vitamin_F
Vitamin_FAuthor

Thanks! And don't worry, I have it almost finished already so it won't be dropped.

2yr
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Shaska
ShaskaLv3

the protagonist is strong / op? or is it weak?

Vitamin_F:Thanks! And don't worry, I have it almost finished already so it won't be dropped.
2yr
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Vitamin_F
Vitamin_FAuthor

Well, just like Aqua, the mc can be considered pretty strong. The problem is that her personality is very similar to Aqua's (That is the reason why Aqua's template was chosen). Aqua's personality involves being a bit... well you know how Aqua is.

Shaska:the protagonist is strong / op? or is it weak?
2yr
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A pretty good read. Writing Quality 5/5 Although I haven't been looking terribly hard, I didn't notice many grammar mistakes at all. It is among the best on this site, so there's no complaints from me. Stability of Updates 5/5 Fanfic is updated once, twice a day. What else can I say? Story Development 4/5 Yeah, it's pretty good, Im satisfied. Author is not speeding through the events but is taking his time to write everything out with enough detail. Character Design 4/5 All characters feel like their canon counterparts and act in such a way. No complaints. World Background 4/5 Author doesn't go out of his way to explain every little detail. It's enough to easily follow along if you already know how the Nasuverse and Grail Wars work in general, but if you don't know anything about them, you might find it a bit hard. Then and again, this is a fanfic, so if you don't know anything about FATE, then why are you here? All in all, as I said, it's a pretty good read. I highly suggest giving it a go.

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I love the story but it is a pity that the author has not written in some time, I hope the story will be resumed-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-..-.-.-.-

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Give me more. .. !! !! !! !! !! Honestly it's super good! !! !! !! The way you portrayed Aqua's character is really good but more updates plz! !!

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