Review Detail of Suicidal_Wolf in RISE OR DIE

This is my first ever novel so plz do expect a bunch of mistakes such as punctuation(commas), repeated words, and lack of word choices(it ain't fancy just basic). The mc is based on myself so if you feel that he's stupid that means you're saying I'm stupid. All in all this novel is a sort of practice to improve myself for my future novels, so if you like it I'll see it through to the end.