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Review Detail of Rivel_Emerald in Dual System: Ascension of A Nameless Nobody

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Rivel_Emerald
Rivel_EmeraldLv152yrRivel_Emerald

Time of writting review: 130 chapters in. 1. Writing quality: Thus far, I havnt noticed any jarring errors. Author has a good sense of grammer, and the way he writes is very descriptive. I can truely picture whats happening in the moment when I read. 2. Story development: I feel like the story isn't moving too fast or too slow. We have time to grow attached to characters, and the state of the world. Yet the story continues forward bringing change, not growing stale. 3. Character design: Alot of the characters feel unique in their own way, whether its personality or powers. The MC is not static, he develops his personality at a good pace and grows. (unlike a certain novel I dropped where the Mc is still hyper innocent and niave 700 chapters in... yeah that got old lol). 4. Updating stability: No complaints here, so far author releases a good 1-2 chapters a day which is pretty impressive. 5: World background: I just wanna say, wow! I have read alot of novels, and can't quite recall a premise like this. I am very fond of the lore/background that has been built up, and can't wait to see the secrets that the mc unveils late in the story. (Sure there are *some* elements in the story that have been introduced in other novels, but this is a refreshing blend) Definitely a very unique system novel. I would recommend you read this, as it is criminally under rated.

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Dual System: Ascension of A Nameless Nobody

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AvalonMystery
AvalonMysteryLv12AvalonMystery

Does this have Harem? Hopefully no but...

Master_Celestial
Master_CelestialLv4Master_Celestial

Regarding the third point. Was it Cultivation Online?

Rivel_Emerald
Rivel_EmeraldLv15Rivel_Emerald

I did not want to name any names, but yes it was. It was a shame too. I really wanted to like the novel. I just couldn't get through the characters and the pace of the plot development. Soo much time wasted introducing random harem girls, and the story started dragging its feet for months. I may give it another reading attempt in the future as I liked the world building and lore, but for the meantime I'm staying away from it.

Master_Celestial:Regarding the third point. Was it Cultivation Online?