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Evilswordmank423
Evilswordmank423Lv42yr
2022-03-05 19:16

The gramar are non readable stat form my point and mc is a pathetic loser i mean his woman was seal and he has no problem with that.........

Dxd :Hero Returned of Isekai

Kamsurik_980
2.9
68 Chs

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Gabichu_Yeah
Gabichu_YeahLv3

I really hate Issei as a person and as a protagonist, MC is Issei's best friend and supports him, so this story is a 1/5 in my opinion and I don't think he will come back, the grammar is horrible and the gender of people is not understood in certain scenes. And Issei got his original harem, so... im fking go

2yr

Rsssse
RsssseLv1

Grammar is worse than MTL, character, and stories are bad. And if you hate Issei, then you will hate this fanfic more because the mc just supports Issei, and Issei still will get his original harem.

2yr
NovelMonster
NovelMonsterLv13

Get an editor. Great premise. Poor execution. Editor. Editor. Editor. Get an editor. Do it. Do it. Just do it. Not grammarly…..or maybe try it, but I don’t think it’ll be enough.

2yr
maria_garcia_4449
maria_garcia_4449Lv1

The only romance that the MC has was the first chapter. He says he wants to live in peace but does not leave the Town or try to get away from the supernatural world. HE IS A FRIEND OF ISSEI. ............................................................

2yr
Uksmal
UksmalLv4

The MC is a friend of Issei... ................................................... ...............................

2yr
Bob_Uchiha_XD
Bob_Uchiha_XDLv4

Mc beta and stupid [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

2yr
Biggubosu
BiggubosuLv5

Man, I don't care about grammar, but it is annoying that mc agrees with everything that is thrown at him. Ah! he is a hero, but that is no reason for him to agree with everything, or better yet, if he really was a hero, he should already start slaughtering the three factions completely, after all, they are the ones who cause the most misery for humans. But this is ignored by him ? Really? UwU [ Use Deepl, and Grammarly. This will improve your grammar, don't forget to reread what is written at least twice. ]

2yr
Bob_Uchiha_XD
Bob_Uchiha_XDLv4

Mc beta . Mc simp. MC is Isse's dog [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

2yr
Mark133_Gt
Mark133_GtLv3

The story is moving at a nice pace and it seems that the story itself is interesting with having alot of potential just hope that he wont join any peeragesi want to see him as a op human that might become a god

2yr
Skiffard
SkiffardLv2

Friend of Issei... [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

2yr
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