The names threw me off at the beginning and then I see the mc as a little light and then becomes able to control Chi as a baby...... So many plot holes and things that don't make sense... However looking at the potential of this novel, I believe that you can still make a comeback but first please edit everything and change their names please.

I heard you said that this would get better after ten chapters. I have endured pain and torture for days. After completing 11 chapters, I do not find it good in any way. I find it very trash. In my culture, we call these kinds of people (that give false hope for clickbaits) 'faaroode' which roughly translates to stinky pig that eats 💩

It is a tad to slow for my tastes and is very confusing in the beginning. What I have gathered so far is that the mc is in a Viking village as a potential earth bender from avatar. I did not read too far to see if he was in the world of avatar with Vikings added in (for some weird reason…) or was a Viking ff mixed with avatar bending and animals, but I read until chapter six. . . And I feel like you are explaining a bunch of unimportant details when I just really want to get to the action and the progression of the story. You are too descriptive of the areas and what they are used for and there is little dialogue/inner monologue. Which is very boring to read though since it will have little or no importance to your story. I did like the start all the way up to him being taken by the wetnurse? Then it just turned into a typical wuxia novel from there.

It's got a great start! I'm looking forward to how you continue this! I'll update my review as more chapters are posted, so that I can give a more complete review, but for now, I'm hooked enough to add it to my reading list!

I can only encourage you, now I do not see any evil in the novel, and not Hamas, but I have no expectations towards you through your comments I hope to produce a personal evil smart, the audit will change in the future

Esto pasa cuando quieres escribir una historia original en un mundo ya trasado estaba interesante aunque el primer capítulo y segundo me decepcionó mucho de su forma pero después te recuerdo que le pusieron tag de villano y se me pasa también está el tema que parece que el autor quería crear una historia bastante larga 300 o más capítulos x lo que parece muy muy lento no veo mucho potencial en la historia y no me extrañaría que tenga bloqueos de escritor cada 50 capítulos y muchos agujeros de la trama TAMPOCO me estrañaria que dejara caer la historia 😶

Really a good story, I hope this fanfic gets more Recognition. The story is solid, the main character is cunning and intelligent.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

People are a little incincere about this fanfic. The story has a gradual pace, allowing for a nice flow. I’d say after the twelfth chapter or so is when things become worthwhile. It’s a safe read despite the lack of updates.