the author tries to write a good story but spends more than 1/4 of each chapter begging for powerstones which pads the chapter length making them cost more. it seems dishonest if not intentionally greedy. the story is ok but the grammar and constant completely incorrect use of words is frustrating as well as the author constantly switching between first and third person perspective causing significant disorientation.
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