Review Detail of Mel_Aniv in Flames of love (bl)

The story was good I must say after tasting the author's writings. Though the first chap felt like too many time skips and too fast-paced. Though it gets better later on. For me, there's still room to grow and I hope I can see the author's journey in this writing life become a mature one. Nothing is impossible and I know we will all become veterans 10 years from now 😉 Just improve, that is [img=recommend]