The only thing in the novel is the writing quality as it brings down a lot of the good points of the novel, besides that the rest are alright.
magicalduck333
Liked it!
LIKEyou are very direct in writing situations , you should add little description and info of situation ,surrounding ,people. background if possible and you end chapter the way , i don't know what it is but it feels incomplete
magicalduck333:Thanks for the review! Is it okay if I ask can you be more specific about the writing quality? I always knew that I am bad at writing, so I hope this can improve my skill. Thanks again!