The concept of the story is interesting. Telling the life in Hell would require advanced world-building skills. As the chapters go further, it becomes jam‐packed with mutiple character POVs. The down-side here, if you may, is that sometimes multiple POVs in one chapter would hinder the progress of the story rather than support one another. Nonetheless the novel has potential. Please give this work a try!
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